CommentsThanks, that was helpful. I've only just played around at speed paintings, this was my first time trying to actually do a nice one.
I see what you mean about the trees in the background. Next time I'll plan things a bit better and not paint the characters directly on the same layer, so I can fix things later. |
However, the robe feels a little less defined. Also the tree in the far back, it could use a little more care. I'm not saying it should be sharply outlined, but at least a little more like the tree in the foreground. The one in the back is coming off more as a green cloud than leaves.
Keeping in mind that it was a speed painting, the overall impression is nice, and the hair really catches the eye. But you really could have used a little more detail on that far tree. It detracts a bit from the painting, more than the contrast I would say.